Step 1 · See the book
Story Hub — craft flags in the draft
Private line-level checks running in your browser. Click any highlighted phrase to see why it was flagged.
These flags were generated from the sample manuscript. Click a highlighted phrase in the text or pick a flag on the right.
Structure map
Scene Grid
Beat alignment and outliers from the sample. Red labels mark scenes that sit outside the expected framework.
Notice the midpoint still marked “uncovered” and the late key-thread scene. This is the kind of signal Aenubis Editor will prioritize.
| Scene | POV | Goal / Conflict | Beat | Status |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Ch 1 — The discovery | Mara | Find the source of the noise under the floor | Opening hook | Healthy |
| Ch 2 — The key | Mara | Decide whether to keep the iron key | Plant | Healthy |
| Ch 3 — The neighbor | Mara | Avoid questions about the floorboards | Rising action | Healthy |
| Ch 4 — Long afternoon | Mara | Wait for night without looking under the boards again | Midpoint | Uncovered |
| Ch 5 — The second sound | Mara | Return to the key before anyone else finds it | Key thread | Late pay-off risk |
Steps 2 & 3 · Get a reader · Plan the pass
Aenubis
Answers are built only from the sample’s scanned chapters and story memory — not invented plot.
Switch lenses and try a suggested question. Beta Reader gives honest reactions; Editor returns ordered priorities.